I missed the part in the first post that no pattern work was allowed - my bad. :)
You may already know this, but ATC tracking threads are mostly created by people who are trying to improve their skills with the help of the IF community before or during the process of applying for IFATC, and therefore, most, if not all, allow (even hope for) pattern work. I don’t believe this is a hard rule, though; just saying people coming to help might be surprised.
I assume you’re looking for feedback on ground and arrival / departure instructions. Very briefly:
- You had my runway right the first time. You should not allow departures from the opposite end of the runway in use for arrivals. There was an aircraft on final RW25L and you sent me to the opposite end, RW07R (and told me to line up and wait while the landing aircraft was rolling down towards me).
Best of luck! :)