First of all you are great! Almost everything was perfect just needs a bit refining!
Here are some things that i noted:
During my first patter the sequencing came a little bit late you should sequence as soon as as possible considering there was only one aircraft on left downwind i should have received sequencing in the upwind only but i got it on late crosswind, although its a minor thing still just saying.
You first cleared me to land, but you corrected it with clearing me for option so great job there!
3.good job on my rwy change request there to make me enter right traffic pattern, but if there’s a rwy change you should mention left or right traffic after clearing for option which you didn’t.
- Great work for my transition request and landing request too!!
Overall you did agreat job! Keep it up!! Feel free to tag me next time when you open!