Great Go around call, thats very nice.
few things tho besides the pattern entry with sequence
1- F-HATZ was for 29L, you told him at 20:47:23 that he is number 1 cleared for the option which was 100% correct, why did you change it to number 3 runway 29R ? he was for 29L
be careful on this, read the previous communication between both of you
2- you told him extend DW i will call your base, that was not needed, thats called over controlling, you sequenced him as number 3 behind KAC right ? then its his responsibility to turn safely behind KAC, cause you already told him follow that guy
now when to use extend DW i will call your base ?
if there is a departure you want to let him take off, and you have many arrivals that you can’t find a free spot for him, so you tell one of the arrivals extend DW, to make that spacing
of if you needed to manage your pattern, but not for spacing problems