Nice work Patrick! Your pattern entries and clearances were good.
The feedback below has Zulu time stamps attached which are also visible in your replay—use it to your advantage!
17:02 - Nice on-guard.
17:02 - Transition at 6,000, should have been at 3,000.
17:04 - Great initial pattern entry when I was overhead!
17:06 - I got a clearance but was not told to make right traffic.
17:07 - I asked for a runway change, got an “unable”. Then you told me to extend downwind when I was flying my upwind leg, told me to disregard the message, told me to turn crosswind when I was turning downwind, gave me an unnecessary right downwind pattern entry for Runway 03R, and told me to extend upwind while on my downwind leg.
17:09 - Clearance was good.
Overall Feedback
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Make sure you know to calculate transitions. You want the transition altitude to be 2,500 feet about field level and rounded up. An in-depth guide can be found in section 3.4 of the ATC Manual.
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Instead of an “unable”, you could have sent "enter left downwind Runway 03L.
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Review pattern legs and try to not send extensions when there are no other aircraft in the pattern.
Great job today—you have a few things to work on but I can tell that you’ll be a fantastic controller! Don’t hesitate to ask questions; They are what help us all grow and learn.