Hey! I was Magic Sun 1. Sorry I couldn’t stay long at your session.
Here are a few points of feedback from me:
• I firstly asked for a transition and you then said “say intentions”, however I already told you my intentions of transition through the airspace. I then requested again and you then approved it so all good.
• Remember when I call inbound to give a pattern entry. When I called inbound for touch and go, you cleared me straight up for the option on 10R, however no pattern entry was given to me. Always give aircraft a pattern entry unless inbound on ILS/GPS/Visual. In this case, you could’ve told me to enter right downwind for 10R, sequence (if applicable) and then issued the clearance.
That’s all though.
Keep up the controlling and I’m sure you’ll continue to improve :)!