Hello Infinite779x!
Welcome to the ATC community!
I was M-01, inbound from KLDJ to KEWR for pattern work.
Unfortunately my feedback list is quite long, but after practising for some time, you’ll be fine!
Please review the ATC manual over here.
Here’s my feedback for you:
(in chronological order)
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As I called for a transition, you cleared me for transition at 2500ft, which is perfect for KEWR. However, your reply to me came quite late.
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N862DB was issued an “adjust speed to follow aircraft ahead”, which is unnecessary, as there were no aircraft near them.
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As I called inbound, I was also issued an “adjust speed to follow aircraft ahead”, but there was no aircraft ahead of me anywhere?
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My pattern work was rejected, but why was it rejected? VFR conditions were satisfied and it was not busy.
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I was correctly cleared to land on runway 11, against a headwind, but my number was wrong. Either me or the other aircraft, N862DB should be number 2, but you cleared both of us for number 1.
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There was no pattern entry or sequence for me before my clearance, or any other aircraft, for that matter.
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You cleared two aircraft for landing on opposite directions, which is a gigantic no no.
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All aircraft you cleared for takeoff were issued “immediate takeoff”, which was unnecessary. They all had plenty of time and there was no need to rush them.
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After I landed, I was not issued a “runway exit” command.
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You told KLM 520 to contact tower when they were taxiing to the runway, which was not needed. Aircraft will contact tower when they are ready, as stated in the command itself.
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All aircraft you cleared for takeoff were told to line up and wait, which is unnecessary. Aircraft can be directly cleared for takeoff, unless there’s a separation issue or for other reasons due to conflict.
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KLM 520’s transition was way too high, at FL240. Your airspace at KEWR extends to 5017ft MSL, where FL240 is many times higher than. A good transition will be either 2500ft MSL or 3000ft MSL.
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You rejected @ToasterStroodie’s pattern work, like me :(
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@ToasterStroodie was not issued a pattern entry when he was inbound, only a clearance.
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@ToasterStroodie’s clearance was wrong, as you cleared him “for the option”, when you rejected his touch and go. It should have been “cleared to land” instead.
After that, I took a little break and tried to taxi again for pattern work, but you kept sending “taxi to parking”, which only meant that you were rejecting my pattern work again?
You need to master the basics of:
a) Pattern entry;
b) Sequence (if needed); and
c) Clearance
Everything I mentioned above is a combination of some minor and some very serious things, but with practice, you’ll be good to go! I didn’t list out all of them, there are a couple more.
Everyone starts off clueless and not knowing anything, so it’s okay to make mistakes as long as you learn from them and get better. After all, that’s what the training server is for :)