Hi, 7O-RST here.
08:12:57 The sequence in my clearance was wrong . You should have put me No2 since Delta 203VA has not touched done yet.
08:20:10 Good work catching the go-around between Delta 203VA and me. But the go around could be slightly earlier.
08:20:37 LATE runway exit command! For jetliner you need to give runway exit command around 70kts.
Great improvements but still some fine tuning space. Hope to see you in your next session.
BTW So glad to cooperate with @Jason102 on the G/A test :-)