Good job @Snow_Cone , you almost did everything right except two things:
Look at this picture, I announced the “Inbound for landing”, you instructed me to “enter right downwind Runway 23R”, perfect, then I requested a “Runway change” and you instructed me to “enter left downwind Runway 23L”. Then you “Cleared me for the option as Number 2, after option make left traffic” but I requested “Landing” not “Touch & Go”, also you forgot to give me a “Sequence” command, in that case: “Easy 7 9 0, number 2, traffic to follow is on final” or better “Easy 7 9 0, enter left downwind Runway 23L, number 2, traffic to follow is on final”.
Look at this one now, you did the same mistake, I announced “Going around” and then you “Cleared me for the option, after the option make right traffic”. It’s better to instruct saying (after the “roger, make right traffic Runway 23R”): “Easy 7 9 0, enter right downwind Runway 23R” and then “_Easy 7 9 0, number 1, Runway 23R cleared to land_”.
These are common mistakes but fortunately they are easy to solve, next time pay more attention on: Sequencing and Landing or Touch & Go.
Remember: Sequence --> Clereance
Note: if there is one aircraft in the pattern you can clear him without a sequence.
I confess that sometimes I make these mistakes, everyone makes mistakes, but you can practice and practice to avoid them.
In the end, again, good job, you are on the right way, hope to see you in the IFATC Group.
Hope you appreciated my help! See you in the skies of IF! Bye!
~ IFAE Mattia Bordoni