Feedback:
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You told me to taxi to runway 32, 28 was closer.
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I don’t understand why you made me change runways after each touch and go.
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I don’t understand why you told me to go around three times.
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You could work on issuing clearances faster.
I would contact an IFATC trainer so they can help you fully understand what to do differently, they’ll provide more in-depth feedback.
I would also take a look at this discussion about transitions: