@Captain_Joel, so here is some feedback. Overall, there are quite a few places for improvement:
- Speed - in the beginning there were only four or five airacft and it took you three minutes to give me Taxi clearance. This will come with time
- When taking off - you never told me to hold short, instead you just left my message there, allowing two other aircraft to take off at different points down the runway, even though I requested first. Remeber to use the “hold short” command,
- You don’t need to give a Pattern entry instruction, when I am remaining in the pattern.
- Sequencing - what happened? If there is more than one aircraft in the pattern you need to sequence by number.
- Cleared for landing - please do it earlier, you cleared me when I was 300 AGL.
Some improvement is needed before becoming IFATC, message me if you have any questions. I highly suggest finding a scout to help with some of your controller skills;