Ok @youngbombs I think there was alot of good potential I saw. I’m happy to see that you understand what the up wind,cross wind, downwind, base and final turns are.
Your sequencing was on point and I think that will become your strong suit so long as you remember to give them as soon as you can. Tyler says in his video tutorials to sequence, clear and your done…those words are stuck in my head lol 
Anyway, I requested a transition and you replied with “say intentions”. A transition allows an aircraft to fly through your airspace. A recent change made all airports (in the game) air space from surface to 5,000 ft. Anything above 5,000 ft isn’t your airspace and aircraft won’t (shouldn’t) request a transition above 5,000ft. A good transition is 3,000 ft because it allows an aircraft to fly through your airspace and join the pattern if they requested it
I think you did awesome and I think after your carefully review the ATC and tutorials category and the ATC flight tab you should contact a recuriter and or supervisor I think you met @Brandon_Sandstrom already I’m still polishing my skills myself so nice job asking for help. Sorry if any info is incorrect in advance.
See you in the skies