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Perhaps the biggest thing, Look at the instructions given to N557YO. Doesn’t it “say contact tower when ready.” We will contact tower ourselves as the pilots.
The transition. This is a big one if you want to become an IFATC. I suggest you view the replay then read This
Here’s you say “Extend Downwind,” and them later I’ll call your base” really you only have to say one or the other.
There is no need to assign speed here. If you say “traffic to follow is in right base” then it’s my job as the pilot to maintain safe distance with the aircraft I’m following.
No need to reiterate “make right traffic” here.
You asked for best forward speed, but I was 1 NM away form the airport. Probably not going to work out very well.
Just try to avoid go arounds. I just didn’t have time (irl) to go around in this situation, sorry.